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f I had to go back in time and think about the moment in life that changed our lives forever it would be the day when the aliens made their appearance.
Before that we lived in harmony. The world we inhabited was not perfect with the occasional wars and times of conflict but those were but small niggles in our history.
Your declaration of love for another was a relief in the end.
It explained the bursts of anger, disappearance over periods of time and rewriting of our history.
I prefer think that the aliens took over your body instead.
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Written for Friday Fictioneers. Word Count : 100
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Great use of the alien invasion motif
ReplyDeleteThanks Neil I am glad you got the link.
DeleteThat's what he believes and he's sticking to it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Iain that's the only logical explanation left.
DeleteA perfectly plausible explanation. That's what aliens do :-o
ReplyDeleteThanks Ali, the human shell was totally transformed.
DeleteBlame it on the aliens, perfect excuse. I like this a lot.
ReplyDeleteThanks Terry I am glad you liked it.
DeleteWhat a horrific realization :( Possessed.... by aliens.
ReplyDeleteThe transformation was dramatic, thanks for reading Lisa.
DeleteDear Subroto,
ReplyDeletePossession by aliens is more comforting than admitting the relationship is over. ;) Perhaps it's all for the best.
Shalom,
Rochelle
The person now is a totally different person from before. This explains the transformation. Thanks for commenting Rochelle.
DeleteI read this through twice, before the realisation hit me. This is fantastic. -Johanna
ReplyDeleteThanks Johanna, I am glad you liked it.
DeleteWe can explain anything in words that work for us! Well done!
ReplyDeleteIt does help when you are seeking answers. Thanks for commenting Dale.
DeleteFascinating take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteThanks Tannille.
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