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| Copyright Janet Webb |
In his excitement at attaining fatherhood Mr Chen didn’t even notice the
awkward silence in the hospital’s nursery. His wife had been subdued in
the months leading up to the delivery. But Mr Chen knew all about
hormonal changes and mood swings.
Their tiny apartment with its thin walls and lack of privacy meant that
she really couldn’t get the rest she deserved.
But he was an optimist and knew his time would come. Like Mr H, his cartoon eared neighbour, who
had moved to a better place.
He was totally enamoured by the baby with the Mickey Mouse ears.
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Written for Friday Fictioneers Word Count : 100
Hoping that a few more visitors will venture to explore the hornet's nest this week. To read the other writers this week click here.
Hoping that a few more visitors will venture to explore the hornet's nest this week. To read the other writers this week click here.
Loved the last line. Very well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you YS, I am glad you liked it.
DeleteI think there might have been an intruder in the nest. Good one.
ReplyDeleteA bee in the bonnet? Thanks for reading Sandra, I am glad you liked it.
DeleteDear Subroto,
ReplyDeleteHmmmm. A paternity test in order? Mr. Chen sounds quite accepting, though. Good man. Amusing story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Mr Chen is in love. Thanks for your comments Rochelle.
DeleteI think there is a choice now... accept to be a father pretending that you are not a cuckold or start over again... I would recommend to buy nice caps for the child, hiding those ears and go on.
ReplyDeleteOr big ear muffs maybe. Thanks for reading and commenting Björn.
DeleteThat's taking neighbourliness a bit far, I think. I hope the three of them are very happy together, nevertheless. Fun story - I like the surprise ending.
ReplyDeleteLove will find a way. Thanks for your comments Margaret, I am glad you liked it.
DeleteWhoops. I think he doesn't want to see what would hurt him, and commend him for loving the kid. Great take.
ReplyDeleteMaybe he has found true love after all. Thanks for your comments Gabriele.
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