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“So what have you here?”
She said that in a breathless tone that always had the
desired effect.
He sucked his stomach in and edged closer. It always was a game and this one was under
control.
There really had been no expense spared when they built this bar. He had made it quite clear that he deserved it.
There really had been no expense spared when they built this bar. He had made it quite clear that he deserved it.
“For you my dear a cocktail to match our mood” he
smirked.
**
The investigator paused the footage.
“Do you want to see the rest Mrs D?”
She knew the settlement would be on her terms.
“I’ve seen enough”, she smirked.
**
Written for Friday Fictioneers Word Count : 100
Wrote this during my usual Friday evening pit stop. Yep at the airport waiting for the ride home.
Dear Subroto
ReplyDeleteLooks like she caught him in the act. Nice set up. Safe travels.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Yep act 1 scene 1. Now time to exit stage left. Thanks for your comments as always Rochelle.
DeleteAw, come on. The action was just starting to heat up. I wanted to see the hot, steamy stuff.
ReplyDeleteI am sure the video is somewhere on the internet ;-) Thanks for reading and commenting Russell.
DeleteI like the set up and your catchy title. Well done.
ReplyDeleteI think it was a set-up too :-) Thanks for your comments Amy, I am glad you liked it.
DeleteMrs. D doesn't seem too unhappy. She has it made.
ReplyDeleteLooks like she planned it that way. Thanks for reading and commenting Gabriele.
DeleteGreat story and a great video at the end! Good for Mrs. D, not so good for (soon to be ex-) hubby.
ReplyDeleteAnne from annehiga.com
Mrs D is a clever one. Thank for reading Anne, I am glad you liked it.
DeleteUh, oh. That old boy is going to be settling up. It would have been cheaper to keep her. He's going to pay for his roving eye. Good writing. :D --- Suzanne
ReplyDeleteHe thought he could get away but that is going to change soon. Thanks for your comments Suzanne.
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