Friday, February 27, 2015

A Country Escape


PHOTO PROMPT -© Dawn Q. Landau

A country escape was what the real estate agent had promised.  There is a disused train track bordering the estate he said.  The house inspection over she wanted to explore. 

A brisk walk and we were walking along the tracks.  We saw them in the distance, the girl with her backpack and the dog trudging behind her.  We shouted a greeting but they turned into surrounding bushes and went out of sight.

On the way out the agent met us.


“Enjoyed your walk? The locals believe the estate has a ghost child and her dog who wander around”, he chuckled.
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Written for Friday Fictioneers. Word Count : 100

What a change from the late entry last week, an entry on time.  And my second of the week as I was not sure if the first one worked. 

9 comments :

  1. Dear Subroto,

    No confusion here. I guess the locals are right. I wonder if this will be a deterrent to the prospective buyers. Nice one.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. It all depends on how the agent markets it ;-)
      [img]http://www.blogcdn.com/realestate.aol.com/blog/media/2012/07/41-not-haunted-1342538451.jpg[/img]

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    2. Oh my! That's a great picture!

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  2. Oh dear. I wonder if they'll buy. I like the estate agent's chuckle. Nice touch.

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    1. Depends if there is a ghost buster or they could just let her walk :-) Thanks for reading and commenting Margaret.

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  3. Oh I think that a ghost on the property should give a premium

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    1. Ha! Ha! Maybe there is a market for that and a certificate of authenticity.

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  4. I wonder it's the girl from the previous story?

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    1. Could be, but she is not telling ;-)

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