“Hello darkness, my old friend
I've come to talk with you again”
I've come to talk with you again”
The song played in his
head as he turned into the alleyway.
“In restless dreams
I walked alone.
Narrow streets of
cobblestone”
Would he ever fulfil
his vow to find her?
“When my eyes were stabbed by the flash of a
neon light”
He saw her standing in
the distance, with the headlights of the car lit behind her. He was swept by a wave of emotion that
threatened to engulf him. There she was,
the woman who had left him at the doors of the orphanage.
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ReplyDeleteThank you. Sorry I accidentally deleted your kind comments.
DeleteI think what I said was: It comes all together, the words, the picture ad the music together are creating a very authentic scene, Great work!
DeleteWow, this one got to me.
ReplyDeleteWhat a unique way to tell your story!
ReplyDeletejanet
Thank you Janet
DeleteDear Subroto,
ReplyDeleteNice use of the prompt and one of my all-time favorite Simon and Garfunkel songs. Bravo!
shalom,
Rochelle
Thank you for providing the writing prompt Rochelle
DeleteThough I am not familiar with these songs but I loved the way the story fit in-a beautiful piece:-)
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it.
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