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So this is death he thinks. Gone before experiencing life in all its glory, still to experience love and a broken heart. To travel and see the world.
The sharp stabbing pain at the base of his spine, is that the kundalini leaving his body?
Oye! Wake up you drunk, the guard gives him a kick to the base of his back.
I'd love read what you think about this post...
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I bet he's going to wish he was dead once the hangover kicks in :-)
ReplyDeleteHa! Ha! The pain is going to stop his reflective mood for sure.
DeleteThat's some hangover if he thinks he's died
ReplyDeleteIt's one of those ugly blackout ones, maybe there is a lesson in it for him.
DeleteI think he's on more than just alcohol!
ReplyDeleteHere's mine!
Could be Keith, or he is just at an age when we think we are unbreakable.
DeleteHow sad. How incredibly sad.
ReplyDeleteIt is sad when a young person lies drunk and wasted but maybe this might be the changing point.
DeleteA different kind of spiritual awakening.
ReplyDeleteDefinitely caused by plenty of spirits ;-)
DeleteA juicers nightmare. Nice take.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely, thanks for your comments Bill.
DeleteDear Subroto,
ReplyDeleteWe did go in somewhat similar directions, didn't we? Dream vs reality. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks Rochelle O am honoured to be in your compamy.
DeleteThat's a great twist at the end!
ReplyDeleteThanks Brenda I am glad you liked it.
DeleteTeehee! I have no sympathy for him at all! Highly entertaining story, Subroto!
ReplyDeleteNot even when he is sober? :-)
DeleteThanks for reading Penny.
Oh dear! I wonder if this will give him pause for thought? I said: 'never again' several times as a youngster before I got the hang of it.
ReplyDeleteSusan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
Thanks Susan and then there are those who say 'never again' all their lives ;-)
DeleteThat's a different light at the end of a different tunnel.
ReplyDeleteAnd it still hurts ;-)
DeleteThanks for reading Nobbin.
It sounds almost like death might be preferable
ReplyDeleteIt seems like that Björn but then after a few pick-me-ups ;-)
DeleteGood news, bad news. Fun story!
ReplyDeleteThanks Anne I am glad you liked it.
DeleteNow that's what I call passed out!
ReplyDeleteHa! Ha! Thanks Lisa for the passing mention.
DeleteWishful thinking maybe. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sandra I am glad you liked it.
DeleteWell, it is KIND OF possibility at new life ... ;)
ReplyDeleteA much reformed life :-)
DeleteThanks for reading Na'ama