Saturday, August 29, 2020

Supernova

PHOTO PROMPT © J Hardy Carroll


The first thing he notices is the absolute freedom of movement.  In the blink of an eye he stands exactly where he imagined himself to be.

 

His spirit guide smiles, he has seen this many times before but the unbridled joy of his wards still delights him.

 

We have but one rule, the guide states, you cannot exist in multiple places at the same time.

 

He sees himself on the trapeze, cartwheeling, somersaulting and standing at the same time. He glows suffused with an intense burst of energy.

 

Just one rule sighs the guide as he awaits the next disciple.




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Written for Friday Fictioneers. Word Count : 100


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17 comments :

  1. "Just one rule" - When will these mortals learn?! Brilliant, enjoyable take on the illustration.

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    1. Thanks Dora, I am glad you liked it.

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  2. Yeah...that sounds about right. :D Good job.
    Ronda

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  3. Look where the "just one rule" thing got Adam and Eve

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    1. But the apple was delicious ;-)
      Thanks for your comments Neil.

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  4. Dear Subroto,

    That "just one rule" thing gets a lot of people in trouble. So much temptation. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Thanks Rochelle, one rule leads to much temptation :-)

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  5. Rules are made to be broken, but maybe not this one!

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    1. Thanks Iain, breaking some rules does have consequences.

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  6. The first thing most of us want is to test that one rule :)

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    1. That is absolutely true. Thanks for your comments Linda.

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  7. Looks like he got a bit carried away! No self-discipline, some people :-)

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  8. I saw spirit guides too. Great minds. I enjoyed where you took it.

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    1. Thanks Tanille, I am glad you liked it.

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