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Say Boss
Ya Tony?
Ya gotta get me another car.
Wassa matter with dis one?
Folks don’t take me seriously Boss.
Explain yourself Tony.
Yesterday I drove downtown to make da hit on Fat Albert. His weasels were lurking around with his henchman Crosseye. He look across da road and say ‘Hey Tony, didn’t know youse worked for Santa, how’s de Elf Mobile?’
Den the weasels start sniggering. I gets mad and shoot all five and finish Fat Albert.
Ya done good Tony.
But now my street name be Tony Da Elf Mobile Driver, who’s gonna be scared of dat?
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It's a dialogue only story this week or as I sometimes call it 'my weakly offering'. I hope it works.
Written for the Friday Fictioneers. Word Count : 100
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Delightful
ReplyDeleteThanks Neil
DeleteI echo Neil, great dialogue
ReplyDeleteThank you Anon
DeleteI enjoyed that dialogue!
ReplyDeleteI am glad you liked it Brenda
DeleteWorked very well! An enjoyable fun read
ReplyDeleteThanks Dahlia
DeleteDear Subroto,
ReplyDeleteThe dialogue works. I could hear and see them. Fun stuff.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Well done and fun vernacular. :-)
ReplyDeleteTony has a point, not quite the car for his career.
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