tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post4302123917792258847..comments2024-02-07T01:54:33.381-08:00Comments on Blogs Away: What Lies BeneathSubrotohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-42485433530071241332014-10-30T22:31:13.874-07:002014-10-30T22:31:13.874-07:00Thanks LHN, I am glad you liked it.Thanks LHN, I am glad you liked it.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-2191651226872450442014-10-29T21:38:27.611-07:002014-10-29T21:38:27.611-07:00Great story, The big blue mixed with grisly finds....Great story, The big blue mixed with grisly finds. Well done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09526646692173867711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-7314303472406975172014-10-29T04:37:50.906-07:002014-10-29T04:37:50.906-07:00Thanks Russell I am glad you liked it.Thanks Russell I am glad you liked it.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-81950453085920689422014-10-29T04:36:55.485-07:002014-10-29T04:36:55.485-07:00Thanks Susan. He will be swanning around in the p...Thanks Susan. He will be swanning around in the prison cell now.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-87062516863706893662014-10-28T14:16:04.343-07:002014-10-28T14:16:04.343-07:00Thanks Karen I am glad you liked it.Thanks Karen I am glad you liked it.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-68633461262478166342014-10-28T06:15:29.502-07:002014-10-28T06:15:29.502-07:00Great 100 word story. You packed it all in there. ...Great 100 word story. You packed it all in there. Especially loved the closing. Well done.Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02951989303915273807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-17633579982002332992014-10-28T05:09:34.882-07:002014-10-28T05:09:34.882-07:00Subroto, Oh well. There are too many cell phone ca...Subroto, Oh well. There are too many cell phone cameras, etc around these days to get away with much. He might also have been a suspect and was being watched. It would have been far better if he'd divorced her. Well written. :) --- SusanP.S. Joshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05115966559427725610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-88074031673982853162014-10-28T02:57:43.000-07:002014-10-28T02:57:43.000-07:00Oh, clever story, Subroto. I love the suggestion o...Oh, clever story, Subroto. I love the suggestion of the swan fact. The water's didn't hide their secret quite well enough, it seems.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-33251528356731806552014-10-27T01:34:05.544-07:002014-10-27T01:34:05.544-07:00Thank you Nan for those words of praise. I am gla...Thank you Nan for those words of praise. I am glad you enjoyed it.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-19013655708298505422014-10-27T01:27:11.322-07:002014-10-27T01:27:11.322-07:00Thank you Anna, I am glad you liked it.Thank you Anna, I am glad you liked it.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-8036973058739642882014-10-27T01:23:33.424-07:002014-10-27T01:23:33.424-07:00And it looks like his 'alternative' method...And it looks like his 'alternative' method has been caught out. Thanks for reading and commenting Björn.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-89194111334996311902014-10-26T20:56:24.174-07:002014-10-26T20:56:24.174-07:00Dear Subroto, What a great story! Very well writ...Dear Subroto, What a great story! Very well written and interesting. Love the still waters reference and the thumbs up at the end. Just magnificent! Nan :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-54417514736177357412014-10-26T15:46:54.316-07:002014-10-26T15:46:54.316-07:00Good job on this. I didn't known where it was ...Good job on this. I didn't known where it was going and you gave it a neat twist at the end.Anna Maria Junushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04715676843018557905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-63895043817577591562014-10-26T13:46:08.349-07:002014-10-26T13:46:08.349-07:00That was one kind of surprising... I can only gues...That was one kind of surprising... I can only guess that there are alternatives to divorcebrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-56971612031791712702014-10-26T04:43:05.619-07:002014-10-26T04:43:05.619-07:00Thanks Rochelle I am glad you liked it. And yes w...Thanks Rochelle I am glad you liked it. And yes we did use the same swan fact, but you know great minds and all that jazz.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-80370420232616387682014-10-26T04:32:35.093-07:002014-10-26T04:32:35.093-07:00Does look it it. Coming soon the unravelling. Tha...Does look it it. Coming soon the unravelling. Thanks for your comments Randy.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-73163014800222904392014-10-26T04:31:43.457-07:002014-10-26T04:31:43.457-07:00Thanks Marge for those word of appreciation.Thanks Marge for those word of appreciation.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-86767627420516199532014-10-26T04:30:36.826-07:002014-10-26T04:30:36.826-07:00Thanks, I'll let this one through then ;-)Thanks, I'll let this one through then ;-)Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-75044655177200280362014-10-26T04:29:33.503-07:002014-10-26T04:29:33.503-07:00Thanks Claire, the lake can hide many secrets, it&...Thanks Claire, the lake can hide many secrets, it's up to us to find them.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-89412360116260362002014-10-26T04:28:22.847-07:002014-10-26T04:28:22.847-07:00Thanks Sarah. I was trying for the effect of plac...Thanks Sarah. I was trying for the effect of placid surface and raging current beneath.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-71355866099574906912014-10-26T02:29:41.911-07:002014-10-26T02:29:41.911-07:00Dear Subroto,
I guess still waters didn't run...Dear Subroto,<br /><br />I guess still waters didn't run deep enough. Interesting that we both used "swan divorce" in our stories with totally different outcomes. Nicely done. <br /><br />Shalom,<br /><br />RochelleRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-60084143794840694572014-10-25T17:32:20.073-07:002014-10-25T17:32:20.073-07:00uh-oh.
Busted.
Randyuh-oh.<br />Busted.<br /><br /> RandyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-7328071893688959162014-10-25T17:14:58.288-07:002014-10-25T17:14:58.288-07:00Fantastic interplay between the surface of things ...Fantastic interplay between the surface of things and that which lies hidden beneath - lake and characters alike. I love your use of the swans as an opening device, and the small thumbs-up gesture and snappy dialogue to close. Just great.<br />Margmargirenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11852245574666501383noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-54992272693895115612014-10-25T09:55:26.540-07:002014-10-25T09:55:26.540-07:00Very well written. This is called a perfect exampl...Very well written. This is called a perfect example of fictitious story, Am so glad to have this on Internet. Loved this one. Bookmarked your web, waiting for the next one. Sumit@sellallhttp://www.sellall.innoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-2086818535863974472014-10-25T09:52:27.586-07:002014-10-25T09:52:27.586-07:00Took me a second read to work out what was going o...Took me a second read to work out what was going on, but I like it. Something bad beneath the lake...<br />ClaireAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com