tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post3256412705959147757..comments2024-02-07T01:54:33.381-08:00Comments on Blogs Away: The Morning SongSubrotohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-6051246444175572652015-05-27T06:05:43.122-07:002015-05-27T06:05:43.122-07:00Thanks Margaret, I am glad you liked it.Thanks Margaret, I am glad you liked it.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-10517641610053114872015-05-27T04:18:34.210-07:002015-05-27T04:18:34.210-07:00Beautiful images, and the twist at the end was a s...Beautiful images, and the twist at the end was a shock.margirenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11852245574666501383noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-49810771919816982722015-05-27T02:25:17.757-07:002015-05-27T02:25:17.757-07:00Or maybe just avoid eating vegetables. They are j...Or maybe just avoid eating vegetables. They are just too dangerous to eat. Thanks for reading and commenting Russell.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-84646712373375404722015-05-27T02:24:14.227-07:002015-05-27T02:24:14.227-07:00Thank you I am glad you liked it.Thank you I am glad you liked it.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-80285098327920321862015-05-26T09:54:38.498-07:002015-05-26T09:54:38.498-07:00So beautiful and reflective, and then comes the he...So beautiful and reflective, and then comes the hemlock. Great creepy twist, I loved it.Gah Learnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12782476711011046782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-62440646916435065362015-05-26T08:45:36.244-07:002015-05-26T08:45:36.244-07:00Note to self - Russell do NOT go to that woman'...Note to self - Russell do NOT go to that woman's house for dinner.Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02951989303915273807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-40488457543466691282015-05-26T05:13:29.605-07:002015-05-26T05:13:29.605-07:00Thanks for your comments Suzanne, I am glad you li...Thanks for your comments Suzanne, I am glad you liked it.<br />The poem was by Tagore indeed, I just could not find a link to only the poem so pasted it whole. <br />Obviously the narrator took care not to eat the hemlock salad ;-)Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-7889998564477091802015-05-26T05:03:14.689-07:002015-05-26T05:03:14.689-07:00Thanks for the poem, Subroto, and the link to more...Thanks for the poem, Subroto, and the link to more. I wondered when I read it if that one poem was by Tagore. Beautiful.I'm wondering who ate the hemlock leaves as the narrator is still alive. Well done. :) --- SuzanneP.S. Joshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05115966559427725610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-9606400482738978382015-05-26T03:04:05.355-07:002015-05-26T03:04:05.355-07:00Thanks Ansumani I am glad you liked it.Thanks Ansumani I am glad you liked it.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-46257907401571033062015-05-26T03:03:32.224-07:002015-05-26T03:03:32.224-07:00Thanks Alice I had fun writing it.Thanks Alice I had fun writing it.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-43641649165335179122015-05-26T03:02:09.637-07:002015-05-26T03:02:09.637-07:00Thanks Amy I glad you liked it. Just goes on to s...Thanks Amy I glad you liked it. Just goes on to show that one has to be careful of poetry loving murderers.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-60768298148477979442015-05-25T14:07:06.241-07:002015-05-25T14:07:06.241-07:00Unexpected twist at the end there....Nice one!Unexpected twist at the end there....Nice one!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-68616626752558846872015-05-25T13:45:07.666-07:002015-05-25T13:45:07.666-07:00That's a brutal turn to such a lyrical piece. ...That's a brutal turn to such a lyrical piece. I like it. :)Alice Audreyhttp://www.aliceaudrey.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-43617660373626457602015-05-25T12:32:12.189-07:002015-05-25T12:32:12.189-07:00So clever. I didn't expect a murder at the end...So clever. I didn't expect a murder at the end either. I was just getting swept away by the beautiful poetry. Nature is deadly, indeed. And isn't it? Great work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-36102321383264237572015-05-24T05:58:43.941-07:002015-05-24T05:58:43.941-07:00I don't know what John Keats would have made o...I don't know what John Keats would have made of a flash fiction writer being inspired by his beautiful lines.<br />"My heart aches, and a drowsy numbness pains<br />My sense, as though of hemlock I had drunk"<br /><br />But I had fun and I am glad you liked it.<br />Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-49455588676327139062015-05-24T05:49:56.205-07:002015-05-24T05:49:56.205-07:00Thank you Archana, I am glad you liked it.Thank you Archana, I am glad you liked it.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-14696851154585310222015-05-24T04:35:36.502-07:002015-05-24T04:35:36.502-07:00It's Friday Fiction, dangers lurk everywhere ;...It's Friday Fiction, dangers lurk everywhere ;-) Thanks for reading and commenting Lizy.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-18245823743696252082015-05-24T04:24:06.799-07:002015-05-24T04:24:06.799-07:00With the these dangerous plants around something w...With the these dangerous plants around something was bound to have happened. Thanks for reading and commenting Björn.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-19392129880032737252015-05-23T14:25:51.308-07:002015-05-23T14:25:51.308-07:00Dear Subroto,
A poetic murderer. There's som...Dear Subroto, <br /><br />A poetic murderer. There's something beautifully creepy about that. <br /><br />Shalom,<br /><br />RochelleRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-10174879245081057552015-05-23T09:45:55.264-07:002015-05-23T09:45:55.264-07:00love the use of the word 'aubade'... and w...love the use of the word 'aubade'... and what an unexpected ending... loved it.. :-) <br />Cheers, Archana - www.drishti.coAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-47315088432963905032015-05-23T09:16:33.413-07:002015-05-23T09:16:33.413-07:00An unexpected ending after a poetic post.An unexpected ending after a poetic post.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13719433.post-76334688488171256242015-05-23T08:49:20.548-07:002015-05-23T08:49:20.548-07:00Oh I didn't expect that murder in the end..Oh I didn't expect that murder in the end.. brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com